Night Man

This is an interesting piece, one of those that say much with few words.  I like that.  I do have one little thing though, that I'd like to mention.  You seem to use the first comma for no reason but to start the rhythm going.  That might've worked in an older-fashioned stanza type piece, but in this style it doesn't really fit.  I'd like to suggest that you don't need the comma there.  And since you already mention who you're talking about in the title--"Night Man," You could simply start the pice with "He walks across the earth slowly."  Now, that kind of blows the rhythm, so maybe you could say, "He slowly walks across the earth."  That maintains the feeling of slowness, and though it mildly changes the rhythm of the first sentence, the new, flowing legato of the change still reflects a slow, nocturnal walk.

That being said, again, I think it's a very interesting piece.  I have no idea what you mean by "His arms reach wide," but I'm sure you mean something.

"But when he visits, those eyes shine like stars."--so he's a captivating visitor whenever he happens upon someone's doorstep?  It might be interesting to see if there are more pieces here, if this piece is part of a larger endeavor.  Still, it says enough with the few words you use here, and could quite well enough stand on its own.  Very good.