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Bleeding
If I would loose a little blood anytime I would listen to music
I would keep on listening to music
I could not keep myself away from the damn tune.
I would keep on listening to music
I could not keep myself away from the damn tune.
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- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
31st Jan 2024 10:34pm
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Re: Re. Bleeding
31st Jan 2024 10:37pm
I can not live without good music. All those long nights with my headphones on, lamenting a lover, praising a friend, recalling beauty. It is me.
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Re. Bleeding
31st Jan 2024 11:47pm
Music for sure. Always, everyday. That's my addiction. Great poem and visual!!!
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1st Feb 2024 1:17am
Re. Bleeding
3rd Feb 2024 9:56pm
This poem matches the frown on your face.
It should not define you.
I would like to see sunshine for an upbeat poem if you can find that place in your heart
It should not define you.
I would like to see sunshine for an upbeat poem if you can find that place in your heart
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Re: Re. Bleeding
4th Feb 2024 8:51am
Sweet sweet addiction that is not that sweet. I often strive for meanings in life. If that was the case for music unfortunately I would bleed a little but try to keep it at bay. I just can not think myself without music.
Re. Bleeding
5th Feb 2024 10:16am
Thank you for the reply. I have always had a radio or music on when driving but as I now live in Australia and the car I have has no music in I I realise how much I miss music.
I have downloaded a lot of things from spotify and play them mostly when I an writing
I have downloaded a lot of things from spotify and play them mostly when I an writing
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Re: Re. Bleeding
5th Feb 2024 10:27am
I listen to music as soon as I get up and prepare for work, and then when I get out of work walking with the headphones, then at home whatever I am doing. I listen to a lot of music.
Re: Re. Bleeding
5th Feb 2024 9:27pm
I have had driving as my passion for more than 50 years and since the advent of people being able to use earphones and iPods and other things to listen to music there have been more people involved in meeting cars and bodies ending on the floor.
Please remember to look before you cross a road as not being able to hear traffic means you need to concentrate with your eyes to stay safe.
Cyclists are the worst because they also have earbuds and are the silent killers with no sense of pedestrians
Please remember to look before you cross a road as not being able to hear traffic means you need to concentrate with your eyes to stay safe.
Cyclists are the worst because they also have earbuds and are the silent killers with no sense of pedestrians
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Re. Bleeding
5th Feb 2024 12:01pm
This speaks on many levels… the catchiness of a tune… the soundtrack of a life… an addiction… I reread it multiple times… new insights each time…
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Re: Re. Bleeding
5th Feb 2024 2:23pm
Thank you dear. I read your verses and they were like little cute butterflies. I loved them. Thank you for sharing them, and for the opportunity you gave me to read them.