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Heartless
everything
was serene
in fake glassy
isolation,
he made for me...
when it
accidentally broke
I was able to see
the real world...
I was able
to see that
a rainbow world
can be seen even
with the mixture of
red and purple colors...
was serene
in fake glassy
isolation,
he made for me...
when it
accidentally broke
I was able to see
the real world...
I was able
to see that
a rainbow world
can be seen even
with the mixture of
red and purple colors...
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Re. Heartless
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2024 5:42pm
Through the lens of infatuation or love, there are usually no impurities, defects, or imperfections. When you're experiencing that cocaine-like high, the world is perfect. How sad it becomes when reality sets in.
This is a sad one, Dimpy.
This is a sad one, Dimpy.
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Re: Re. Heartless
24th Jan 2024 4:20am
A person blind in love can not see the reality...or he/she does not want to see the reality...well thank you Tim...
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23rd Jan 2024 5:44pm
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24th Jan 2024 4:21am
Re. Heartless
23rd Jan 2024 9:49pm
Re. Heartless
24th Jan 2024 1:16am
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24th Jan 2024 4:37am
hey snaggy
I want to live this wonderful life...wanna celebrate this life ..just do not want to pass the life...so had to breaking out...
I want to live this wonderful life...wanna celebrate this life ..just do not want to pass the life...so had to breaking out...
Re. Heartless
24th Jan 2024 2:09am
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24th Jan 2024 2:17am
looking for a shoulder to live the rest of my life happily.. Well thank you so much for your warm support.. 🥰
Re. Heartless
25th Jan 2024 00:03am
Time will heal all wounds. Your love is waiting for you to be found. Keep on writing.
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Re. Heartless
25th Jan 2024 6:51pm
Better to see truth than live in darkness. Happy to see you're eyes are clear. Keep looking. What you're seeking is out there somewhere waiting
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