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BEACH
i dreamed myself
lovely
as a woman i saw
on the beach
and every step
i took
was a holy
incantation,
and the gods
heard my
every prayer,
and the wind
mussed my hair
and i swear,
even that
was perfect
lovely
as a woman i saw
on the beach
and every step
i took
was a holy
incantation,
and the gods
heard my
every prayer,
and the wind
mussed my hair
and i swear,
even that
was perfect
Published 3rd Jan 2024
Author's Note
Inspired by the Reincarnation comp, but then i fell short of the 200 word minimum.
Women -- idealized, sometimes objectified -- but most often the catalyst of desire, change, obsession, and movement in my life. If reincarnation is the way, I'll likely return as one.
Women -- idealized, sometimes objectified -- but most often the catalyst of desire, change, obsession, and movement in my life. If reincarnation is the way, I'll likely return as one.
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4th Jan 2024 00:14am
I love the way you portrayed the rebirth as someone both ethereal and powerful; very Helenistic.
That the gods would hear you, and as an incantation, men would venerate you, and even the wind would dress you.
Great shit!
That the gods would hear you, and as an incantation, men would venerate you, and even the wind would dress you.
Great shit!
5th Jan 2024 11:02am
8th Jan 2024 11:17pm
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Need I say more?
Need I say more?
