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Repentance Of A Port Forgotten By Time By Tracey & JPR
Primal energies weave through as the ocean meets the sea. Calm waters with mad minds.
Ever-changing tides, churning the depths up and out as an unheard scream gets lost in the winds.
Towards an expanse vacant as the feelings that no longer exist yet, we strain to maintain this facade praying none may view the cracks.
Falling into each wave, begging the universe to cradle the demons within, or just aid in the escape, or simply, just simply cast them into the depths of the void.
As we await what may never return, at candlelit tables apart in spirit, occupied in form only.
The requiem of a night’s promise gone sour.
The tides move delicately, yet ever haunting is the music to resonate the wind’s continued dance of strained existence.
Etched in time, in the shadows people seek to see, the witch holds the bloody memories in a clasped hand for all eternity. The bitterness will never yield to forgiveness.
Deadlights and false fronts in a hollow seaport the light exudes as equal a warning of its inhabitants as its rocky shore’s embrace.
What was, will certainly bleed, trapped in photographs of a town.
Now, forever, out of time.
Ever-changing tides, churning the depths up and out as an unheard scream gets lost in the winds.
Towards an expanse vacant as the feelings that no longer exist yet, we strain to maintain this facade praying none may view the cracks.
Falling into each wave, begging the universe to cradle the demons within, or just aid in the escape, or simply, just simply cast them into the depths of the void.
As we await what may never return, at candlelit tables apart in spirit, occupied in form only.
The requiem of a night’s promise gone sour.
The tides move delicately, yet ever haunting is the music to resonate the wind’s continued dance of strained existence.
Etched in time, in the shadows people seek to see, the witch holds the bloody memories in a clasped hand for all eternity. The bitterness will never yield to forgiveness.
Deadlights and false fronts in a hollow seaport the light exudes as equal a warning of its inhabitants as its rocky shore’s embrace.
What was, will certainly bleed, trapped in photographs of a town.
Now, forever, out of time.
Published 26th Oct 2023
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26th Oct 2023 5:09am
27th Oct 2023 4:43am
There are some rough seas out there for sure. Thank you for the comment 🩵
29th Oct 2023 2:12am
Dear T,
Epic in its presentation. Passion and sadness rolled into one for me. A lovely blend of two poetic voices. This is such a great write. H🌷
Epic in its presentation. Passion and sadness rolled into one for me. A lovely blend of two poetic voices. This is such a great write. H🌷
13th May 2024 2:28pm
Repentance Of A Port Forgotten By Time" by Tracey & JPR is a hauntingly beautiful journey through the depths of emotion and the passage of time. The poem masterfully weaves together imagery of the primal energies of the ocean meeting the sea, creating a sense of both calm and turmoil. The ever-changing tides mirror the tumultuous nature of human emotions, while the unheard scream lost in the winds symbolizes the silent struggles hidden beneath the surface.
The portrayal of vacant expanse and feelings no longer existing, juxtaposed with the facade maintained to conceal cracks, resonates with a sense of longing and desperation. The imagery of falling into each wave, begging for solace or escape, captures the raw vulnerability of the human spirit in moments of despair.
The poem's exploration of memories trapped in time, held by the witch's clasped hand for eternity, adds a layer of depth and poignancy. The bitterness and unforgiveness depicted in the shadows of the town's past evoke a sense of melancholy and loss.
Overall, "Repentance Of A Port Forgotten By Time" is a stunning testament to the power of poetry to evoke emotion
The portrayal of vacant expanse and feelings no longer existing, juxtaposed with the facade maintained to conceal cracks, resonates with a sense of longing and desperation. The imagery of falling into each wave, begging for solace or escape, captures the raw vulnerability of the human spirit in moments of despair.
The poem's exploration of memories trapped in time, held by the witch's clasped hand for eternity, adds a layer of depth and poignancy. The bitterness and unforgiveness depicted in the shadows of the town's past evoke a sense of melancholy and loss.
Overall, "Repentance Of A Port Forgotten By Time" is a stunning testament to the power of poetry to evoke emotion
