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ON A LONELY NIGHT
Plans fallen
through; the
wine chilled,
the music selected,
special robe chosen,
candles glowing,
rose petals
making a path
to the throne
when you will
be worshipped;
toys selected...
oh, tonight is
so lonely...waiting
for a person I
only met yesterday
If you change your
plans, I'm here.
PLEASE
My ache is waiting
too. you said you
wanted it.....
through; the
wine chilled,
the music selected,
special robe chosen,
candles glowing,
rose petals
making a path
to the throne
when you will
be worshipped;
toys selected...
oh, tonight is
so lonely...waiting
for a person I
only met yesterday
If you change your
plans, I'm here.
PLEASE
My ache is waiting
too. you said you
wanted it.....
Published 6th Oct 2023
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6th Oct 2023 10:12pm
Ugh…that’s the worst. All pent up with no place to go…
A party of one never disappoints, but it’s not nearly the same. I feel ya on this one.
A party of one never disappoints, but it’s not nearly the same. I feel ya on this one.
6th Oct 2023 10:52pm
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6th Oct 2023 10:46pm
Gutted one the loneliest number
Left with the hope, hunger and desire
Awful
Love and light
Ron
Left with the hope, hunger and desire
Awful
Love and light
Ron
7th Oct 2023 3:03pm
I hope the intended person read this poem & immediately hot footed it straight over to you, sir. I could have saved you a lot of trouble with your poetical prowess here with a much simpler version...
"Where the hell are ya?!"
It's called minimalism. 🥂
"Where the hell are ya?!"
It's called minimalism. 🥂
7th Oct 2023 3:06pm
Thanks, I'll try that approach: "Where the hell are you?" Thanks for the comment, always appreciated. Hugs and peace, Oral
Anonymous
8th Oct 2023 3:46pm
One cannot take the place of two but it's never up to us.
8th Oct 2023 7:17pm
