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Surfer Dude
Dressed like a bum
From
The slums
* * *
Paddle board
In
Back pack/packed back
At the bungalow
Down
Below
* * *
The radar
From
The slums
* * *
Paddle board
In
Back pack/packed back
At the bungalow
Down
Below
* * *
The radar
Published 26th Aug 2023
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26th Aug 2023 4:40am
I liked the pun on “down below” with “the radar”. This is a fun little piece.
Anonymous
26th Aug 2023 6:04am
My man!! Seek and keep your peace!!
Much respect
Naaj
Much respect
Naaj
