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Sweet love
Love has never
felt so good
until i met you
Love has never
felt so sweet
untill i tasted
it from you
I never thought
I'll ever feel the way
I feel when I'm around you
I'm so overwhelmed
by the love
I've experienced
ever sence
I met you
You give me love
that i never thought
it ever excited
I love you
I will always
love you
felt so good
until i met you
Love has never
felt so sweet
untill i tasted
it from you
I never thought
I'll ever feel the way
I feel when I'm around you
I'm so overwhelmed
by the love
I've experienced
ever sence
I met you
You give me love
that i never thought
it ever excited
I love you
I will always
love you
Published 1st Jun 2023
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2nd Jun 2023 3:41am
So much love poured out of heart. This is nice, this is felt.
But in paragraph 4, ...... Ever SINCE will be better option that Ever SENCE. This is a humble suggestions.
Keep up with the good job.thanks
But in paragraph 4, ...... Ever SINCE will be better option that Ever SENCE. This is a humble suggestions.
Keep up with the good job.thanks
