WILTED PETAL

You got fight for love.  Keep on writing.

Thank you Phantom

This would really like to be set to music. It touched me a little.

Thanks I love this one, it's special and special behind it. I want to add music to it

Maybe I'll sit down this afternoon and try to come up with something, but I don't know how to send it to you. Probably telepathically :-D

Where do you live at?

Czech Republic

Oh ok well get WhatsApp app and u can contact me there off of here.

I'll end it well.

INSIDE ROARE (it's new so be careful not to wear it out)

tea rose

When the whole region smells of chamomile.
I hurry after her
even though I know it's not there.
Just the smell of the tea left behind by you
a pinch in a colander and the smell of vanilla.

aaaah...
To pluck the tea rose and hurry so that it does not wither,
I want to smell the tea again.
Tea Fairy where are you, words only hurt
tea fairy i want to hug you forever

Your blue eyes, like two wells
from which he wanted to drink in the desert.
Gold in the hair, gold strings... what I hear is aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Every touch smells of cinnamon, I put that taste under my pillow.

aaaah...
To pluck the tea rose and hurry so that it does not wither,
I want to smell the tea again.
Tea Fairy where are you, words only hurt
tea fairy i want to hug you forever

Very creative

Thank you, im practicing the melody for it right now

you are talking :-D

I don't know if I sent it to you already

INSIDE ROAR
WREATH OF DAISIES

I drop a small wreath of daisies on the water,
I hope in vain that luck will bring me.
As I look into the water, someone suddenly covers my eyes,
he sang me a beautiful song
lied beautifully, promised things, then left.

x times
My brook, tell me the truth where could he have gone
my brook, stop for a moment and talk.
my brook, I don't want to salt your water,
where it can be.

Just a little hope and I let myself down the water,
like a small wreath of daisies.

She drowned.

INSIDE ROAR
WATERFALL (from river to spring cycle)

It's raining
aaaaaaaaaaa

water deep into the valley.

It stings aaaah
aaaaaaaaa

its coldness makes the horse's groin ache.

You wash the weekday out of my hair
and you touch them tenderly
I feel that you also perceive me. aaaaaaaaaaaaaand

Rf) Waterfall - what falls into my hair.
     forever - whoever didn't believe me should keep looking
     waterfall - of life and dreams. aaaaaaaaaaaaaand

     Waterfall - a rainbow rises in the valley,
     forever - a dream that won't let me sleep,
     waterfall - what sings in my veins. aaaaaaaaaaaaaand

It's raining
aaaaaaaaaaa

crystal white.

rumbling,
aaaaaaaaaaa
as it shatters against the rock, it is cool,
icy cuddly.

Rec: Try my white waterfall
        to cool my burning heart.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaand
aaaaaaaaaaaaaand
aaaaaaaaaaaaaand

Rf) Waterfall - what falls into my hair.
     forever - whoever didn't believe me should keep looking
     waterfall - of life and dreams. aaaaaaaaaaaaaand

     Waterfall - a rainbow rises in the valley,
     forever - a dream that won't let me sleep,
     waterfall - what sings in my veins. aaaaaaaaaaaaaand

You can't help me, I'll leave a link if they don't ban it. Your texts were very beautiful, but I have nothing to do here.
https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100090402566316

It's about money when I wanted to pay....."can't outside US states" keep stacking and looking for love. I believe you, because as long as you are looking for her you will compose beautiful verses, I am afraid of what will happen after that. Have a great time my unknown.

I would like to stay here because of your poems and nice answers. Because I know that writing for someone gives a lot of effort to finish the work, to feel it. Please do it for me, try to publish at least one, feel free to sign it, but I would like to hear your opinion and criticism. Please.

It's working now hahahaha. It's just me being stupid.

Just because I managed to publish something doesn't mean anything. I have nothing to write anyway. Now there will be a big concert euphoria, so I won't have time to sit down to the guitar, maybe until Sunday, but I have two texts from you that really deserve the music. We'll see. Feel free to publish my texts, I will be happy. Maybe I'd try some collaboration too. I don't have a lot of materialistic things, on the contrary, you have vigor and directness. There is also something special, different, I like to learn. ;-)

Awww that's sweet, well when I get a chance ill work and look on them

You definitely deserve it, especially your lyrics speak for everything. They say, "we want to try it with music" maybe just as an instrumental backdrop.

Yeah well if you get the app on your phone, "
"WhatsApp" you can talk off of this site

I found out that they don't like it even in English. I throw everything in the trash and I was so looking forward to that.

I guess you don't understand what im saying

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/485005-crying-in-the-rain/

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/485059-wreath-of-daisies/

I understand that very well. Do you want the lyrics or not?

I'm looking at them