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vernal hips I
vernal hips
vernal hips
of sweet rose blues
whose petals luxuriate
in tropic of Eden
with existential fig leaf
for hidden cosmos
as original as sin
on the birth of the autumn
when the fall felt heavy
as a cross of tree boughs
carrying the weight of love
vernal hips
of sweet rose blues
whose petals luxuriate
in tropic of Eden
with existential fig leaf
for hidden cosmos
as original as sin
on the birth of the autumn
when the fall felt heavy
as a cross of tree boughs
carrying the weight of love
Published 6th May 2023
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8th May 2023 3:30am
John, this is so sensual, in such a soft and delicate way. Your thoughts are beautiful, inviting and breathtaking, all at the same time. Love this: "petals luxuriate in tropic of Eden."
Spiritual, yet sexy beyond words.
Spiritual, yet sexy beyond words.
8th May 2023 3:59am
I absolutely adore that you felt the sensuality in this poem. And I am ecstatic to know this it was sexy but in a soft and delicate way. I aspire to write like this and knowing that you a person whose poetry sings to me of beauty and life appreciated this. Your words here and elsewhere have found a home in my heart.
John
John
