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Harder
Harder
From the touch of my lips
Rounder
From circling finger tips
Warmer
From my tongue and my kiss
Up all night
Carnal thoughts of your tits
Sliding
Beneath smooth legs and hips
Pushing
Upward to excite your wet clit
Wondering
Should I take a bold risk?
Instead waiting
Listening to your breaths
And writing
Words revealing weakness
From the touch of my lips
Rounder
From circling finger tips
Warmer
From my tongue and my kiss
Up all night
Carnal thoughts of your tits
Sliding
Beneath smooth legs and hips
Pushing
Upward to excite your wet clit
Wondering
Should I take a bold risk?
Instead waiting
Listening to your breaths
And writing
Words revealing weakness
Published 26th Apr 2023
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20th Jun 2023 11:47pm
Takes me back to junior high and first listening to The Who do "Squeeze Box"!
24th Jun 2023 7:39pm
23rd Jul 2023 1:08pm
Like the form you use and how you describe the obsessive desires you feel so plainly. Loved that final phrase, "words revealing weakness."
23rd Jul 2023 10:02pm
Thank you. I really enjoy your submissions, so I am particularly grateful for comments from someone like you
23rd Jul 2023 10:09pm
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9th Feb 2024 3:30am
22nd May 2024 4:22am
I like the geography in this piece, RPM. Nice use of BOLD. Good word choice and sexy.
22nd May 2024 4:28am
Thanks for your supportive words. I’m more shy to write than many people here. Comments from good a writer like you keep me goin.
24th May 2024 1:14pm
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