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Love Hurts
It hurts to move; it hurts to speak, to breathe;
To realise, with every single breath,
She might exhale her requiem and death
Will still the room she lights, with silent ease.
If she is now the centre of attention,
Where, once, she was the flower on the wall.
She's not so shy sans shadow, so they stall
The recollection. Yet, it's worth a mention.
They eulogise; they pray; they keen. They fear
Intensity can never be surpassed;
The air exudes raw tension; love exerts
A dreadful pressure. Time is drawing near
When any second left could be the last;
It hurts to move, to speak, to breathe. It hurts.
To realise, with every single breath,
She might exhale her requiem and death
Will still the room she lights, with silent ease.
If she is now the centre of attention,
Where, once, she was the flower on the wall.
She's not so shy sans shadow, so they stall
The recollection. Yet, it's worth a mention.
They eulogise; they pray; they keen. They fear
Intensity can never be surpassed;
The air exudes raw tension; love exerts
A dreadful pressure. Time is drawing near
When any second left could be the last;
It hurts to move, to speak, to breathe. It hurts.
Author's Note
Accidents can have enduring consequences that lead to morbid thoughts.
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Re. Love Hurts
9th Apr 2023 12:40pm
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9th Apr 2023 8:35pm
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11th Apr 2023 1:40am
The death process of a mom or wife as observed by a loved one.
nazareth 1976 - "love hurts"
nazareth 1976 - "love hurts"
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11th Apr 2023 4:56am
Love hurts. Always treat her with Kindness and Respect and be there for her when she needs you. Keep on writing.
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18th Dec 2023 10:16pm
Perhaps. I dislike my family. So annoying. I guess plutonic love is closer. It is a new type of love, one where you share the intimacy of the mind, with those you haven't met face to face. And a connection you wouldn't make with people face to face is made. I am over analytical about these things.
Regards James
Regards James
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19th Dec 2023 11:50pm
This one is personal - how I felt after a motorbike accident - though I have dramatised it a bit - no death little or otherwise but enduring physical pain nonetheless - yay!
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