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Twilight's Tapestry - with deliabear
Behold the seducing silence of twilight's magic tapestry
as shadows intricately lace the worn pages of the ancient dark
As naked entanglements of bark haunt my shade
in a profuse display of nature's erotic intimacies
The sky looking down on me with its Mona Lisa eyes
drowsy with the melancholic passage of time
A spiral fluttering of cascading leaves
replicating descent of memories from my mind's eaves.
as shadows intricately lace the worn pages of the ancient dark
As naked entanglements of bark haunt my shade
in a profuse display of nature's erotic intimacies
The sky looking down on me with its Mona Lisa eyes
drowsy with the melancholic passage of time
A spiral fluttering of cascading leaves
replicating descent of memories from my mind's eaves.
Published 2nd Apr 2023
Author's Note
Deliabear made this into a wonderful poem. I owe her my gratitude.
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Thats class,
Hard to capture the mood and brilliance of twilight, but ye have done it.
Looking down on me with Mona Lisa eyes is brilliant image.
Good poem.
Regards,
BITS
Hard to capture the mood and brilliance of twilight, but ye have done it.
Looking down on me with Mona Lisa eyes is brilliant image.
Good poem.
Regards,
BITS
2nd Apr 2023 3:00pm
2nd Apr 2023 2:59pm
PaleSkies came up with the very creative idea. I like the way our words collided and merged. Truly was alot of fun.
2nd Apr 2023 3:03pm
2nd Apr 2023 3:02pm
A tree in the night; and such a wonderfully described scene. Thanks to both of you!
2nd Apr 2023 3:04pm
2nd Apr 2023 3:24pm
2nd Apr 2023 3:28pm
With a name like PaleSkies …you know the poetry will be good. 😎
But I have to go read your poetry here ASAP too - I’m a fan of this collaboration and I’m looking forward to seeing both your styles to better understand the fusion I enjoyed. 👏
But I have to go read your poetry here ASAP too - I’m a fan of this collaboration and I’m looking forward to seeing both your styles to better understand the fusion I enjoyed. 👏
2nd Apr 2023 3:43pm
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2nd Apr 2023 4:22pm
👏 👏 👏 nice 👌 ink spill 👏 🤔 👀 love your melancholic musing please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
2nd Apr 2023 6:31pm
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2nd Apr 2023 4:59pm
Stunning! It's beautiful beyond words. Love, love, love this! Thank you for posting it.
Faith
Faith
2nd Apr 2023 5:01pm
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2nd Apr 2023 9:32pm
It's fantastic and was a true pleasure to read. I love everything about it!
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2023 6:07pm
Everything is spiritual, including twilight. Beautiful poem. Thank you for writing.
2nd Apr 2023 6:33pm
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2nd Apr 2023 6:44pm
Gorgeous and brilliantly conceived imagery through a melding of talents into imagery that dazzles and mesmerizes. It read like a song of beauty and passion that I never wanted to end. With these words, my soul is restored and shined. The chemistry of you two was a wonder to behold. Lyrical genius that gleams like a newborn star in heaven.
John
John
2nd Apr 2023 7:01pm
It was a hoot to write and everything clicked. Thant you for your wonderful comment.
3rd Apr 2023 9:37am
2nd Apr 2023 8:29pm
A lovely collaboration. I have been enjoying delia's work, ty for sharing.
LJ
LJ
2nd Apr 2023 9:33pm
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