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Pythagorean Justometry - with MrBlack
Dropping bars like a vampire fang,
I'm on vampirerave.com, doing my thang,
The macabre corn's shaking, it's quite ugly,
But I'm still here, getting crazy and bubbly.
Nightshade chaos on the scene,
Twilight's queue, all dark and mean,
Passing oeuvres like a merchant of menace,
The site's got my mind in a state of penance
My hypotenuse is tight like geometry,
A right angle mind, it's all justometry,
Scooping drinks like Pythagorean in G flat
I'm in deep like the sea of the hypotenuse
Vampire lore, tales of death and sin,
These undead creatures just walked right in,
Exploring realms of darkness and power,
This site's got me glued for hours and hours.
So come on, join me, let's get on our freaky,
On vampirerave.com, it's all a bit creepy,
But that's the vibe we love and we crave,
It's like Slim Shady said, "I am whatever you say."
I'm on vampirerave.com, doing my thang,
The macabre corn's shaking, it's quite ugly,
But I'm still here, getting crazy and bubbly.
Nightshade chaos on the scene,
Twilight's queue, all dark and mean,
Passing oeuvres like a merchant of menace,
The site's got my mind in a state of penance
My hypotenuse is tight like geometry,
A right angle mind, it's all justometry,
Scooping drinks like Pythagorean in G flat
I'm in deep like the sea of the hypotenuse
Vampire lore, tales of death and sin,
These undead creatures just walked right in,
Exploring realms of darkness and power,
This site's got me glued for hours and hours.
So come on, join me, let's get on our freaky,
On vampirerave.com, it's all a bit creepy,
But that's the vibe we love and we crave,
It's like Slim Shady said, "I am whatever you say."
Published 12th Mar 2023
Author's Note
Thank you MrBlack for sending me chills.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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12th Mar 2023 4:45pm
Though the rhyming schemes read (feel) forced
the spill
IS
interesting
Would love to read after tweaking
as could be a good spill
thank You for sharing with me
the spill
IS
interesting
Would love to read after tweaking
as could be a good spill
thank You for sharing with me
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13th Mar 2023 6:19pm
Pale Skies you and Mr. Black lit up my afternoon! You two got into the midnight groove and created something that is both gothic and fun. I enjoyed ever illimitable phrase h ere. This is real vampiric poetry that is as enjoyable as it is dark. That site sounds awesome!
John
John
13th Mar 2023 6:44pm
