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25yrs to life
forgotten memories
can't be written
they hide behind blank pages
& battle weary mornings
I toss them carelessly
into a dusty corner
to grow repressive cobwebs
over graymatter prison cells
you don't get to choose
what or who you remember
they're all condemned
guilty by association
out of body, out of mind
my children's milestones
left behind...
& those were mine
those were mine
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Re. 25yrs to life
8th Mar 2023 8:06am
Re: Re. 25yrs to life
8th Mar 2023 5:15pm
It really is....and to come back from it with your sanity in tact, is a gift.
Thanks for the comment!
Thanks for the comment!
Re. 25yrs to life
8th Mar 2023 10:55am
Your words touch me deeply as my mom is losing huge portions of her memory.
She's not stuck in a happy place either.
She's not stuck in a happy place either.
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Re: Re. 25yrs to life
8th Mar 2023 4:52pm
I'm sorry to hear that, it's hard in any sense. I'm thankful every day, even through the gaps and once in a while I'll remember another piece or two. Even if I don't ever get them back completely, I have my children.
They tell me stories about all the ridiculous things I did & how brave I was. Those are what I hold close these days, they remember for all of us.
You are one of her favorite memories, I guarantee it.Thank you so much for sharing
They tell me stories about all the ridiculous things I did & how brave I was. Those are what I hold close these days, they remember for all of us.
You are one of her favorite memories, I guarantee it.Thank you so much for sharing
Re: Re. 25yrs to life
8th Mar 2023 5:48pm
Happy tear falling....thank you for sharing. And telling me I'm a favorite memory of hers. We have had good times, rolling with laughter. One day at a time for me. And your children sharing stories with you is wonderful. ❤️
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Re. 25yrs to life
8th Mar 2023 3:35pm
Dear K,
Poignant beyond measure. The raw emotion and pain of having something so illy taken is rendered in this poem beautifully. A difficult subject on which to comment but poetically an outstanding statement amazingly written. H🌷
Poignant beyond measure. The raw emotion and pain of having something so illy taken is rendered in this poem beautifully. A difficult subject on which to comment but poetically an outstanding statement amazingly written. H🌷
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Re: Re. 25yrs to life
8th Mar 2023 5:13pm
I'm sure it's a challenge to comment on such things, I mean what do you say? And some days I have trouble commenting anyway, words are funny that way.
I just love the thought you put into yours and sincerely appreciate each one, so thank you!
I just love the thought you put into yours and sincerely appreciate each one, so thank you!
Re. 25yrs to life
Re: Re. 25yrs to life
9th Mar 2023 5:18am
I think we all have at least once in our lives and sometimes it changes us, but of all the terrible things I've been through, I truly believe there are good people out there, they're usually the ones you least expect them to be.
I guess all we can really do is be the kind of person we wish humanity could be
Thanks for coming by
I guess all we can really do is be the kind of person we wish humanity could be
Thanks for coming by
Re. 25yrs to life
9th Mar 2023 8:22am
This is a scary, delicate subject for anybody to write about or comment on but I applaud your bravery and your poem. Actually, what's described in your write is exactly one of the things I fear the most. I wouldn't have had the courage to delve into that, so kudos to you for the courage you had to treat this subject so beautifully. Thanks for sharing!
Mundus
Mundus
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Re: Re. 25yrs to life
9th Mar 2023 4:29pm
It is a delicate subject for sure and I think we tend to keep things like this to ourselves after going through them. Maybe it's something we need to talk about more often......
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a great comment
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a great comment
Re. 25yrs to life
10th Mar 2023 4:39am
Many times due to some internal wounds our routine life starts changing, we start forgetting things. Even a small thing is not remembered, but if we get someone's soft feelings and care, then we become safe and recovers. you wrote very well.
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Re: Re. 25yrs to life
10th Mar 2023 9:28pm
So very true, comfort and safety become priority after such things.
Thank you so much
for stopping to comment
Thank you so much
for stopping to comment
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Re: Re. 25yrs to life
10th Mar 2023 11:22pm
Thanks for talking the time for such an in depth and accurate comment, really appreciate it!
Re. 25yrs to life
10th Mar 2023 11:05pm
The trials of motherhood, this made me think back to those moments that are long gone but live strong within my mind. Some of them are pleasant and some of them are lamentable, but they are mine and I cherish them in joy or to help me grow into a better person.
LJ
LJ
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10th Mar 2023 11:10pm
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