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Deep
You penetrate my existence.
Sweetly barging into
my empty places.
Waltzing into my mind.
For a thousand eternities,
I would lead you into my deep.
But you already know the way....
Sweetly barging into
my empty places.
Waltzing into my mind.
For a thousand eternities,
I would lead you into my deep.
But you already know the way....
Published 22nd Feb 2023
Author's Note
A connection I had with a man in a faraway land.
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I decided to go to a poem you wrote one year ago today. Good write. Having a distant relationship is difficult but it could work if both people are focused & dedicated 100% Your writings are always so good Debbie. I'd love to take my time & read everything you wrote. Someday.
Well this is a surprise. This poem was about a friendship that just seemed kismet.
He was a chess player I met online, lived in Iraq. We are still in touch. Barely with the time difference.
That is truly kind of you to want to read all my poems, I want to read them too, lol
deliabear is a fierce chess player too 😊 ♟️ 🗡️
He was a chess player I met online, lived in Iraq. We are still in touch. Barely with the time difference.
That is truly kind of you to want to read all my poems, I want to read them too, lol
deliabear is a fierce chess player too 😊 ♟️ 🗡️
23rd Feb 2024 10:35am
Awesome!!! Vision of Insanity doesn't know anything about chess. Someday you can show me.
You mean checkmate you. 😛
My dad was and my brother are master level players.
Chess runs in the family.
My dad was and my brother are master level players.
Chess runs in the family.
