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I am.
I am the lonely creature you see wading through time
Stuck in the mud unable to fly
Watching as others drift effortlessly by
I am the discarded stray left in an alleyway
Chained and unable to do anything right at all
Waiting for the day that the walls surrounding me fall
Published 28th Jan 2023
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29th Jan 2023 1:51am
Really good write. I like the strong but concise message you presented here.
Well done.
Well done.
wading through time . great metaphor, and used in the right place.
thanks for sharing, spill your ink, but dont cry over spilled milk
Be optimistic !.
thanks for sharing, spill your ink, but dont cry over spilled milk
Be optimistic !.
