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She and the sea
Adriana sometimes stopped
and looked at the sea
and she would remain silent looking at the sea
she was always just silent
when she stopped and looked
at the sea and sometimes
when she looked at me.
PAR
and looked at the sea
and she would remain silent looking at the sea
she was always just silent
when she stopped and looked
at the sea and sometimes
when she looked at me.
PAR
Published 16th Dec 2022
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18th Dec 2022 9:35pm
dear Par
your poem brought thought of the french movie
Le mari de la coiffeuse. 1990
a warm smile
silent lotus
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your poem brought thought of the french movie
Le mari de la coiffeuse. 1990
a warm smile
silent lotus
`
19th Dec 2022 1:04am
4th Jan 2023 1:25am
Thank you for submitting your poem into my competition. The sea is a beautiful and majestic place to visit.
