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undone

you were naked
poet
and I could see
the light
with which you undress...

PAR

Written by PAR

(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)

Published 12th Dec 2022

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Re. undone

Anonymous

- Edited 12th Dec 2022 12:53pm

12th Dec 2022 12:39pm

It was a long time ago. She undid me, until I found somebody else

#sadness

i was always dismembered

12th Dec 2022 1:19pm

Every poet has a pet executioner!

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Anonymous

- Edited 12th Dec 2022 1:59pm

12th Dec 2022 1:58pm

Indeed. Thanks for the inspiration!

12th Dec 2022 2:07pm

☺️😉😊

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