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undone
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undone
you were naked
poet
and I could see
the light
with which you undress...
PAR
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PAR
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
Published
12th Dec 2022
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Re. undone
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Dec 2022 12:53pm
12th Dec 2022 12:39pm
It was a long time ago. She undid me, until I found somebody else
#sadness
i was always dismembered
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PAR
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
12th Dec 2022 1:19pm
Every poet has a pet executioner!
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Re: Re. undone
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Dec 2022 1:59pm
12th Dec 2022 1:58pm
Indeed. Thanks for the inspiration!
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PAR
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
12th Dec 2022 2:07pm
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