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This poem is called Have you ever thought of...The Fear... ......they must have felt..... on the Titanic............

Feeling...the floor...Tilting...
Knowing.....the cold water...
was flooding in....!!!!!!!!
and that the ship was..... Sinking...!!!!!!!!
.....
the Fear they must have felt.......
.....must have been....
Unreal.....
.....
like nothing we could imagine......
...
.....
..........but....I guess they all had... Hope..
....
....Yes... they all had the hope..
....of getting to a lifeboat....
....
........but sadly..... most did not....
....
....
I am sure.....
when all those people got on the ship....
no one thought...
....that night would be their last....
.......
No....I am sure.....no one thought.......
....the ship would hit an iceberg and...
Sink....
...........that night..
...
........but it did....
....
....
and when I thought more about it...
I saw....
our life.....
.....is just like....
the Titanic....
.....
Yes for....we all know.....
....one day....
we will....
....all die......
.....
You don't know when...
.....no one knows....
when their life will end....
.....
But....like those on....
the Titanic....
....
it could be tonight.......
.....
.....
And I have to tell you......
if you hope to be saved...
there is only one...lifeboat...
...
...
Jesus Christ....
....
.........
....
Sooner or later.....
....your ship will sink...
...
and the only lifeboat...is...
The Lord Jesus...
.....
.....
I would suggest...
getting rid of your sin.....
......and....
........getting closer...... to Him....

..... :)
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