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watery
in bedrock gypsum,
blooms an orange chrysanthemum.
heartbeats drip
down ivory towers,
ending at ankles so strong
to hold up the carnage.
carnations,
staged in the window
drop their leaves.
blooms an orange chrysanthemum.
heartbeats drip
down ivory towers,
ending at ankles so strong
to hold up the carnage.
carnations,
staged in the window
drop their leaves.
Published 16th Oct 2022
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16th Oct 2022 6:59am
I like how your poem becomes a journey. From the deepest cavern of rock and crystal, to the surface where the most breath taking flora live. Excellent work. Your intricate description allows me to see your vision vividly.
16th Oct 2022 7:55am
16th Oct 2022 8:02am
It's my pleasure! Keep doing what you're doing, you have a lot of talent!
27th Oct 2022 10:14pm
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- Edited 6th Jul 2023 1:45pm
15th Apr 2023 5:32pm
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