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Watching Porn with Norman Bates
Purgatory of unwatered priapism
Cloaked the devil in 1970’s skin-flick,
Midnight massed bible-back desires
Into ambulatories of his naked Cathedral.
Miss Bernadette Bend, Wendy Choo…
Bracelet litany of his broken wrist
Strap-on Susie, Moisty Mary…
Mother-fist silhouettes desolation
Across plains of plasma porn.
One day,
Lonely as Monroe on slab
Candle explosion detonates light:
Voyeurs on world’s balcony will view
An old man armchair entombed,
Drowned in wet patch, saturated by strangers,
Epitaph of masturbatory ink and a nation of…one.
Let loose in the morgue or farm yard,
One can only wonder?
Cloaked the devil in 1970’s skin-flick,
Midnight massed bible-back desires
Into ambulatories of his naked Cathedral.
Miss Bernadette Bend, Wendy Choo…
Bracelet litany of his broken wrist
Strap-on Susie, Moisty Mary…
Mother-fist silhouettes desolation
Across plains of plasma porn.
One day,
Lonely as Monroe on slab
Candle explosion detonates light:
Voyeurs on world’s balcony will view
An old man armchair entombed,
Drowned in wet patch, saturated by strangers,
Epitaph of masturbatory ink and a nation of…one.
Let loose in the morgue or farm yard,
One can only wonder?
Published 5th Oct 2022
Author's Note
ERULGCT 179. Throwaway scribble. First draft. I have an acquaintance who submits streams of erotica & porn (not here), By his own admission, he is 40something virgin. Apparently, he gets his inspiration from porn. Own conclusions. Drawn. He's actually not a very nice bloke.
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5th Oct 2022 1:53pm
A pretty icky and yucky poem, as it needs to be. Speaks well to the ugly voyeurism and sadomasochism of certain entertainment choices. There’s a real bleakness to the portrait of the armchair, as well as just grossness and bile.
5th Oct 2022 3:55pm
Many thanks Runes. Appreciated. The real protagonist is a pretty much charmless & odious individual, so all things considered, it was always going to be a repellent write.
Funny enough. There was a TV series Armchair Thriller (available for free on You Tube) and the opening sequence of a shady shadow sitting into an armchair was in my mind.
Funny enough. There was a TV series Armchair Thriller (available for free on You Tube) and the opening sequence of a shady shadow sitting into an armchair was in my mind.
5th Oct 2022 4:09pm
You allow me here to play with dissidence, or thoughts I don’t always connect to each other. I also enjoy the brevity with words. You say much with less.
5th Oct 2022 6:11pm
Many thanks Jazz. The subject matter isn't really worthy of ship loads of words. Appreciate the comment concerning brevity.
