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"He'd Have to Be..."
Who could handle ALL of this?
He'd have to be
An extraordinary
Human being
Their lips
Would have to be
Tantalizing
A touch
Should just mesmerize me
Have me trembling
And twitching
Pussy just wishing
For that dick
To get
Inside of it
And he better know
How to stick it
And should definitely
Know how to lick it
Lick a pussy soaking wet
Know to suck on it
And yes, all the cum out of it
And yes, I would love to taste it
Off them lips...;)
And better believe
I'm going to damn sho try my best
Working on that dick
Faithfully
Wanting him to skeet skeet
That cum in and on me...
But also
He must be
Gentle and loving
Know how to talk to me
Know how to treat me
Should never wish to hurt me
Who would receive me
And accept me
For who I am
For who I want to be...
His loving
Must be
Tender and sweet
He must rock me
Off my feet
He'd Have to be
My everything
He'd Want to be
My everything...
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written on 3-26-12 by Tara A. aka LL
He'd have to be
An extraordinary
Human being
Their lips
Would have to be
Tantalizing
A touch
Should just mesmerize me
Have me trembling
And twitching
Pussy just wishing
For that dick
To get
Inside of it
And he better know
How to stick it
And should definitely
Know how to lick it
Lick a pussy soaking wet
Know to suck on it
And yes, all the cum out of it
And yes, I would love to taste it
Off them lips...;)
And better believe
I'm going to damn sho try my best
Working on that dick
Faithfully
Wanting him to skeet skeet
That cum in and on me...
But also
He must be
Gentle and loving
Know how to talk to me
Know how to treat me
Should never wish to hurt me
Who would receive me
And accept me
For who I am
For who I want to be...
His loving
Must be
Tender and sweet
He must rock me
Off my feet
He'd Have to be
My everything
He'd Want to be
My everything...
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written on 3-26-12 by Tara A. aka LL
Published 26th Mar 2012
| Edited 11th Jan 2013
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30th Mar 2012 2:50am
I know thats right girl!
I love this! it flows like warm water over the soul
great read!
I love this! it flows like warm water over the soul
great read!
31st Mar 2012 10:01pm
Anonymous
1st Apr 2012 00:24am
This works. The short, staccato lines convey a sense of urgency appropriate to the subject, words like 'stick it' internally rhymed with 'lick it' make it down and dirty at an almost primal level. I like that you change the mood/tone at the end and affirm the more human, vulnerable side of your female sexuality, lifting it from the realms of simple porn to the higher station of erotica. Nice work. Red.
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