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‘It’s my depression,
my issue'
you tell me while
the edges
of your shadow
splice me at the knees, and
fold me into your story.
my issue'
you tell me while
the edges
of your shadow
splice me at the knees, and
fold me into your story.
Published 22nd Aug 2022
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Commenting Preference:
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22nd Aug 2022 8:51pm
22nd Aug 2022 11:15pm
Thank you so much LilDragonFly; humbled by your comment.
I appreciate you.
warmly,
ursa 💜
I appreciate you.
warmly,
ursa 💜
22nd Aug 2022 9:44pm
22nd Aug 2022 11:16pm
Thank you so much Tim; I appreciate you stopping by and your comment.
Kindly,
ursa 💜
Kindly,
ursa 💜
23rd Aug 2022 00:31am
23rd Aug 2022 1:41am
thank you Laluma, it makes a a lot of sense; something I strive for in all my shorter pieces. I appreciate you.
warmly,
ursa
warmly,
ursa
23rd Aug 2022 3:55am
Dear U,
Can’t help but think about the time I experienced transference. “His” depression was his until we finally got to the nub of it and it was something else entirely. Felt more like a bat to my knees but splicing has a more poetic sound.
This poem is outstanding-a knife to my heart-yet outstanding. H🌷
Can’t help but think about the time I experienced transference. “His” depression was his until we finally got to the nub of it and it was something else entirely. Felt more like a bat to my knees but splicing has a more poetic sound.
This poem is outstanding-a knife to my heart-yet outstanding. H🌷
24th Aug 2022 1:20pm
Dear H,
A bat to the knees is exactly how it feels.. thank you so much for stopping by and for your kind comment.
I appreciate you.
warmly,
ursa 💜
A bat to the knees is exactly how it feels.. thank you so much for stopping by and for your kind comment.
I appreciate you.
warmly,
ursa 💜
