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Blind Fury!
I felt the pain searing through my veins
straight from my toe
all the way to my head
the fire locked away in my heart was rekindled~
Now I'm fuming!
Oh yes I'm fuming!
An invisible smoke whistled out of my ears
I gritted my teeth
but my body still shuddered...
I twitched my fingers
and crossed my brow
"Anger" was written in red on my forehead.
how dare she..!?
just HOW DARE SHE...!!!?
..step on my toe and walk away!?
straight from my toe
all the way to my head
the fire locked away in my heart was rekindled~
Now I'm fuming!
Oh yes I'm fuming!
An invisible smoke whistled out of my ears
I gritted my teeth
but my body still shuddered...
I twitched my fingers
and crossed my brow
"Anger" was written in red on my forehead.
how dare she..!?
just HOW DARE SHE...!!!?
..step on my toe and walk away!?
Published 21st Mar 2012
| Edited 6th Jun 2014
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21st Mar 2012 11:39pm
ehhh. i do like it. "step on my toe and walk away" aint that right.
i hate when people do that ._.
i hate when people do that ._.
22nd Mar 2012 5:40pm
22nd Mar 2012 8:33pm
Anonymous
25th Mar 2012 6:37pm
I know a few like that, all too well. Great write! :)
25th Mar 2012 7:04pm
15th Jan 2014 00:41am
Anonymous
15th Mar 2014 10:01am
Anger always sounds better when you're truly angry if you get what I mean. I can feel your fury!
Thank you for the read.
Thank you for the read.
