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Crimson pain
the razor presses down slicing my wrist
turning and gliding, making a twist
the blood leaks out, my demons portrayed
the scars run deep, they do not fade
the tears roll down, the pain i can feel
the hate, the deceit, it's all real
life is short, but mine will be shorter
my time is soon, my demons are running
warn hell; i am coming.
turning and gliding, making a twist
the blood leaks out, my demons portrayed
the scars run deep, they do not fade
the tears roll down, the pain i can feel
the hate, the deceit, it's all real
life is short, but mine will be shorter
my time is soon, my demons are running
warn hell; i am coming.
Published 10th Mar 2012
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29th May 2015 5:25am
Very driven and vivid. Lots of great descriptions with many cries for help. Sooo many commas involved the pause at the end gets no acknowledgement. Could be bro k en differently to deliver even more of it's soul. Keep grindin
