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Lover's Cry
Can you feel the tension
Between us
It's electrifying
Almost to the point
Of being unbearable
But it isn't...
Even through the sparks
Can you hear
My body cry out
For the closeness
Of your body
My desire for you
I can't deny
Nor would I want to
Shall we go
To that place
The secret place that
We both know
Where passions
Deeply flow
Between us
It's electrifying
Almost to the point
Of being unbearable
But it isn't...
Even through the sparks
Can you hear
My body cry out
For the closeness
Of your body
My desire for you
I can't deny
Nor would I want to
Shall we go
To that place
The secret place that
We both know
Where passions
Deeply flow
Published 29th Jan 2022
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29th Jan 2022 5:18pm
That feeling that words can't adequately convey. But in heart and spirit, through touch and reaction....... sensually, sweetly, seductively. A hunger burning deep inside us all. 😍
29th Jan 2022 5:43pm
Thank you for your wonderful comments on my poem and the honor of being placed on your reading list. They are very much appreciated!
Faith
Faith
29th Jan 2022 8:47pm
So beautifully written and expressive of emotions and feelings flowing through your words deeply and freely nicely composed dear poetess 🙏😉🦋
29th Jan 2022 11:59pm
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. You always say the sweetest things when you comment on my work. I love your visits.
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30th Jan 2022 1:40am
Dear FM,
Hot hot hot and sizzle! You brought the razz matazz and ruckus with this poem. I really enjoyed the intimacy and hunger in this piece between the two lovers. I also appreciated the undercurrent of love as well as passionate desire. Elegant write. H 🌷
Hot hot hot and sizzle! You brought the razz matazz and ruckus with this poem. I really enjoyed the intimacy and hunger in this piece between the two lovers. I also appreciated the undercurrent of love as well as passionate desire. Elegant write. H 🌷
30th Jan 2022 2:06am
Dear H,
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks and for putting my poem in your R/L. I'm both humbled and honored by what you said. You made my night and I thank you.
Faith
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks and for putting my poem in your R/L. I'm both humbled and honored by what you said. You made my night and I thank you.
Faith
31st Jan 2022 1:36pm
I love this masterpiece I love the imagery and the painted vivid images of love you painted with your words I can paint the pictures of the lovers crying out for each other
31st Jan 2022 1:40pm
Thank you very much for your wonderful response to my poem. Both your comments and being put on your R/L mean a lot to me!
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12th Feb 2022 10:50am
Hello there Lost Viking! I have to say that this is one of the sweetest comments I have ever received from anyone. I am so honored that you enjoy my work, especially the love poems because they come straight from my heart! You made my heart smile and I thank you for that.
13th Feb 2022 5:06am
And I must say that your comment was one of the sweetest ever! It makes me happy to know I made your heart smile. I do love your love poems.
13th Feb 2022 9:26am
Thank you for letting me know that you do. It means more than you know to me.
