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Oh God I love you.
Tonight is the night,
We get to meet again.
It's such sore sight,
When I know how long it's been.
Your touch is like fire,
Your lips like ice.
I can't help but admire,
Everything you'd do to entice.
Oh my sweet love,
Take me away tonight.
I am yours my love,
In the warm star light.
Oh how I ache,
To be held by you,
To feel your embrace,
I'm sure you knew.
Don't play coy,
I'll let you bind me,
I'll be your toy.
I'm all yours, can't you see?
I can feel that warmth,
It's growing inside me.
It's so hot, so warm,
Makes me realize what I wanna be.
The feel of my nails,
Scratching down your back,
It's almost unreal,
Sometimes I wonder if it is, in fact.
I can't take it much more,
I already feel like I'll explode.
My love is seeping out of every pore,
I can't take it anymore.
We get to meet again.
It's such sore sight,
When I know how long it's been.
Your touch is like fire,
Your lips like ice.
I can't help but admire,
Everything you'd do to entice.
Oh my sweet love,
Take me away tonight.
I am yours my love,
In the warm star light.
Oh how I ache,
To be held by you,
To feel your embrace,
I'm sure you knew.
Don't play coy,
I'll let you bind me,
I'll be your toy.
I'm all yours, can't you see?
I can feel that warmth,
It's growing inside me.
It's so hot, so warm,
Makes me realize what I wanna be.
The feel of my nails,
Scratching down your back,
It's almost unreal,
Sometimes I wonder if it is, in fact.
I can't take it much more,
I already feel like I'll explode.
My love is seeping out of every pore,
I can't take it anymore.
Published 7th Mar 2012
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Anonymous
7th Mar 2012 6:18am
That you can write tasteful erotica. It was very likable, but has a flair of youth, and inexperience to it. It's what gives this piece it's charm, it doesn't detract from it. Overall a good write! :) Maybe a little bit long. A shorter version could do this poem justice I think. I dunno, maybe not?
7th Mar 2012 2:59pm
Thank you! My best friend just lost her virginity, so that's what inspired me to write this. > u
Anonymous
7th Mar 2012 6:39am
I enjoyed this little sexy piece here :) Well done
7th Mar 2012 2:59pm
