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Dealing in Dark Ideals
Those
Million little pieces
Lit up
In
Festival lights
Deceased -
On
That night,
That dark – stark night;
Heartbreak,
It was called,
Where you
Fell
Just so you
Could
Fall.
But there is pro and contra to all,
As I watch the darkening
Moving
Like…
An ellipse of eclipse.
Now you know the void
written in the language of a different I,
So… Cold
These things we cannot avoid -
In a world
That is born to
Die.
But if be here we must,
Just trust
Your self to be
Heart felt devoured,
Empowered
As
That which can be broken
Will be broken
But
The broken cannot be broken… At all
The broken are:
Immortal
Published 12th Dec 2021
Author's Note
I was thinking of the quest to never hurt again,
which, in my mind, seemed like the quest for Eldorado
or the fountain of youth...
Or... Like the decision to become a member of the undead.
I was telling someone that heart break is glorious and empowering,
how accessing the void is liberating, how it gives the potential of being impervious.
which, in my mind, seemed like the quest for Eldorado
or the fountain of youth...
Or... Like the decision to become a member of the undead.
I was telling someone that heart break is glorious and empowering,
how accessing the void is liberating, how it gives the potential of being impervious.
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13th Dec 2021 10:46am
Liberating by accessing the void of our existence. This was a beautiful, emotion-filled write. I liked it's free form.
6th Apr 2022 8:58am
13th Dec 2021 11:03am
6th Apr 2022 9:06am
Thank you LDF.
It is... Sort of strange for me
to look back at past writes...
(Not totally shore why... Thinking about that.)
(Maybe I don't want to think about that,
and maybe that is precisely why I should...)
There is this poetry manuscripts contest
coming up in July...
I wrote a manuscript for it...
But have considered maybe taking
pieces from my... Portfolio? Here.
I dont know...
I do like the idea of a more unified production...
And what I wrote...
Does engage a social issue... Which I think is cool.
I may just return to that
and add what I have in the back of my mind to add.
I really don't know that I like the idea
of sort of... Judgement of poetry.
However...
I just thought... Were I to win.
It could bring awareness to different things,
this website included...
I do realize that the new "eye draw"
is social media...
I have thought of hiring someone
to do all my social media...
But then... I like having my fingerprint on things.
And...
I wonder about losing my soul.
but I don't know that such a thing is possible.
Ultimately...
I believe that poetry
introduces magical energy into all of my endeavors...
And that alone... Is... Enough.
I really really appreciate your encouragement
and the energies you have introduced into my sphere.
It is... Sort of strange for me
to look back at past writes...
(Not totally shore why... Thinking about that.)
(Maybe I don't want to think about that,
and maybe that is precisely why I should...)
There is this poetry manuscripts contest
coming up in July...
I wrote a manuscript for it...
But have considered maybe taking
pieces from my... Portfolio? Here.
I dont know...
I do like the idea of a more unified production...
And what I wrote...
Does engage a social issue... Which I think is cool.
I may just return to that
and add what I have in the back of my mind to add.
I really don't know that I like the idea
of sort of... Judgement of poetry.
However...
I just thought... Were I to win.
It could bring awareness to different things,
this website included...
I do realize that the new "eye draw"
is social media...
I have thought of hiring someone
to do all my social media...
But then... I like having my fingerprint on things.
And...
I wonder about losing my soul.
but I don't know that such a thing is possible.
Ultimately...
I believe that poetry
introduces magical energy into all of my endeavors...
And that alone... Is... Enough.
I really really appreciate your encouragement
and the energies you have introduced into my sphere.
