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Make it End
Darkness,
The closet closing in.
Red sweater hanging,
Gripping tightly, a pen.
Drunken men,
Screaming then,
Breaking smile,
Make it end.
The closet closing in.
Red sweater hanging,
Gripping tightly, a pen.
Drunken men,
Screaming then,
Breaking smile,
Make it end.
Published 1st Dec 2021
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1st Dec 2021 11:18am
Dear B,
This is a difficult subject on which to comment. What I admire in your poem is its meter. There is such an energy describing the anxiety and caged feelings, and I’m so few words. You’ve done an amazing job depicting that feeling and emotion. H🌷
This is a difficult subject on which to comment. What I admire in your poem is its meter. There is such an energy describing the anxiety and caged feelings, and I’m so few words. You’ve done an amazing job depicting that feeling and emotion. H🌷
