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Yeti loved her
Sometimes watching pretty girl trudge through snow
Dark hair stand out like bright eyes
Against ice and white
She never really know I watching
Hiding out in nothing like monster
Me thinks maybe word for feeling
Watching her makes Yeti feel warm inside
Even when it grows dark and there is no light
Hear other human call feeling love
Love sounds warm and soft... but is sometimes sad
Like fluffy kitten that chokes to death on bit of pretty ribbon
Like Yeti hiding in snow
Watching pretty girl that will never know
But now it is time to go
While feeling warm in ice and snow
Maybe one day she will know
Yeti loved her
Dark hair stand out like bright eyes
Against ice and white
She never really know I watching
Hiding out in nothing like monster
Me thinks maybe word for feeling
Watching her makes Yeti feel warm inside
Even when it grows dark and there is no light
Hear other human call feeling love
Love sounds warm and soft... but is sometimes sad
Like fluffy kitten that chokes to death on bit of pretty ribbon
Like Yeti hiding in snow
Watching pretty girl that will never know
But now it is time to go
While feeling warm in ice and snow
Maybe one day she will know
Yeti loved her
Published 4th Mar 2012
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1st Apr 2012 1:08am
This so reads like a version of The Hunchback of Notre Dame. The simile,"Like fluffy kitten that chokes to death on bit of pretty ribbon", is very original!
1st Apr 2012 7:00am
thank you I'm glad you liked it I really wanted to write something from a point that most people wouldn't consider but I am pleased you enjoyed it =)
24th Sep 2012 2:22pm
Written in Yeti-speak - It's kind of cute and creepy at the same time, yet it totally works!! I also like the fluffy kitten line!
25th Sep 2012 2:17am
thank you actually made this for a different competition though it worked really well for being both cute and creepy
17th Oct 2012 1:14am
