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the first time
bit of a shock, first time he saw her naked, walking into the bedroom before she was ready,
embarrassed, he stared at the clock
Published 8th Sep 2021
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Anonymous
8th Sep 2021 8:20am
the reader comes full circle--nice!
8th Sep 2021 3:27pm
10th Sep 2021 00:00am
Isn't there another word that rhymes with clock that she should be staring at? Hugs and peace, (OO)
13th Sep 2021 1:03am
There’s something rather sweet about this. The innocence with which he looks away from her, not knowing how to conduct himself, exactly. You capture a lot in such a small moment.
