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Death of Me

Tonight be the death of me
Fight to breathe desperately
Noose tied next to me
Suicide successfully
Written by tomgoonery (Tommy.)
Published
Author's Note
My entry for a competition.
4 lines, each ending with a long “E” sound.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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