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Death of Me
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Death of Me
Tonight be the death of me
Fight to breathe desperately
Noose tied next to me
Suicide successfully
Written by
tomgoonery
(Tommy.)
Published
21st Aug 2021
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4E
Author's Note
My entry for a competition.
4 lines, each ending with a long “E” sound.
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#dark
#death
#depression
#rhyming
#suicide
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Re. Death of Me
Ashley_M_Hardy
(Cashley Marie)
14th Feb 2022 3:08am
I like this. Simple, yet gravitating! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Re. Death of Me
tomgoonery
(Tommy.)
14th Feb 2022 3:23am
Thanks!
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