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How Is It Going For You
Howdy do
hi how are you doing today
well I hate to say it
but everything I try to do
in the last few days has
been wrong or backwards
or worse than that
I can't understand it
I ain't never seen nothing like it
maybe one of my dam women
has put a hex on me
Lord have Mercy
you can't never tell what
a woman might do
but I am not gonna complain
about nothing things could
get worse you know
I have had that happen
hi how are you doing today
well I hate to say it
but everything I try to do
in the last few days has
been wrong or backwards
or worse than that
I can't understand it
I ain't never seen nothing like it
maybe one of my dam women
has put a hex on me
Lord have Mercy
you can't never tell what
a woman might do
but I am not gonna complain
about nothing things could
get worse you know
I have had that happen
Published 5th Aug 2021
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2021 00:47am
First 7 lines, I thought: that's called being in a relationship, for a guy.
And then, wouldn't you know it.
This isn't mine, btw: I was feeling down. Someone said, "cheer up, things could be worse." I cheered up, and sure enough, things got worse.
Enjoyed!
And then, wouldn't you know it.
This isn't mine, btw: I was feeling down. Someone said, "cheer up, things could be worse." I cheered up, and sure enough, things got worse.
Enjoyed!
6th Aug 2021 9:40am
hi yeah that happens a lot in love affairs or did so with me
I had some strange love affairs come to me and wish I had
not had about 10 of them or more than that really I guess
that is why I write all the crazy love poems...I started writing
poems in prison and I wrote mostly love poems I hadn't done
anything else but sell pot and mess with bad women for so long
it was all I knew to write about at the time I got some longer ones
that is wild but too much typing women got me busted 8 times
I had some strange love affairs come to me and wish I had
not had about 10 of them or more than that really I guess
that is why I write all the crazy love poems...I started writing
poems in prison and I wrote mostly love poems I hadn't done
anything else but sell pot and mess with bad women for so long
it was all I knew to write about at the time I got some longer ones
that is wild but too much typing women got me busted 8 times
