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love theory iv
love is an empty fascist bottled up in puppet wood..
when you break all the skin away..
you're left with nothing but wood-shavings..
when you break all the skin away..
you're left with nothing but wood-shavings..
Published 24th Jan 2010
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Anonymous
24th Jan 2010 4:58am
Very witty and observant little verse. Your more restrained pieces can often be just as edgy as your full blown horror fests, though all your work is carried off with a certain deranged flair. The "empty fascist" comparison was a masterstroke.
24th Jan 2010 5:24am
I have love theories 1-3 somewhere on this fucking computer but I can't find it.. love theory 5 is on it's way soon.. it's much more uplifting and lighthearted than this one
Anonymous
24th Jan 2010 5:31am
i love this nathan, yeah wooeden shavings indeed, stunning piece!
24th Jan 2010 8:28pm
hehe you gotta read love theory v it's on a completely different thought wave
24th Jan 2010 10:40am
24th Jan 2010 8:28pm
yes darlin I think many of us can relate thank you for the comment darlin muuah
24th Jan 2010 7:18pm
24th Jan 2010 8:29pm
read love theory v now.. a different take entirely.. but mostly I've felt love to be exactly like this poem thanks for the read.. cheers!!
Anonymous
24th Jan 2010 9:18pm
..skin anyway, looking for the facist.
Suckers for punishment, puede ser?
Nice verse. No - not nice, lol - good verse..
S
Suckers for punishment, puede ser?
Nice verse. No - not nice, lol - good verse..
S
24th Jan 2010 10:13pm
we keep breathing the skin anyway.. well put.. and yes not nice.. good perhaps :D cheers dude!!
