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A little Sunday Afternoon Haiku
Only such patience
I have is for butterflies.
You; caterpillar.
I have is for butterflies.
You; caterpillar.
Published 13th Jun 2021
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14th Jun 2021 4:35am
Dear U,
I admit to a smirky chuckle in relating to my version of your poem. I envisioned complete tolerance and friendly relations with the butterfly. The butterfly who gives no trouble and just flies about its business. It’s the dang caterpillar causing complete consternation. Eye rolls and exasperated sighs with its bothersome behavior. I found I could call out a few names for this caterpillar. Great write. H🌷
I admit to a smirky chuckle in relating to my version of your poem. I envisioned complete tolerance and friendly relations with the butterfly. The butterfly who gives no trouble and just flies about its business. It’s the dang caterpillar causing complete consternation. Eye rolls and exasperated sighs with its bothersome behavior. I found I could call out a few names for this caterpillar. Great write. H🌷
14th Jun 2021 10:29pm
Honoria, I could not resist when this came to my mind and so so so happy to hear you got the chuckle! I really do have no patience for caterpillars.. figure it out like we are all having to do! wishing you well, ursa
