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Sweet Revenge!
She looks down upon him, bound to the bed.
Checks that the gag is tight round his head.
Then stands astride him and strips-off her dress.
Admires his cock as it grows to its best.
She lowers herself, rubs clit upon tip.
Then plunges upon him with a crack of her whip.
She rides him and grinds him. Takes what she needs.
She screams as she comes, but then she proceeds
To lift herself off, denying his high.
His frustration clear from his gag-muffled cry.
She sucks his erection, deep and at pace.
But again she denies him, with a smile on her face.
He'd been bragging to pals of her desires and lust.
So taking revenge seems totally just.
So, with a ring of gloss red around the base of his cock,
And her juices still glistening on his shaft hard as rock,
She leaves him bound up and gets on with her life.
Leaves him bound up to be found by his wife.
Checks that the gag is tight round his head.
Then stands astride him and strips-off her dress.
Admires his cock as it grows to its best.
She lowers herself, rubs clit upon tip.
Then plunges upon him with a crack of her whip.
She rides him and grinds him. Takes what she needs.
She screams as she comes, but then she proceeds
To lift herself off, denying his high.
His frustration clear from his gag-muffled cry.
She sucks his erection, deep and at pace.
But again she denies him, with a smile on her face.
He'd been bragging to pals of her desires and lust.
So taking revenge seems totally just.
So, with a ring of gloss red around the base of his cock,
And her juices still glistening on his shaft hard as rock,
She leaves him bound up and gets on with her life.
Leaves him bound up to be found by his wife.
Published 29th Apr 2021
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29th Apr 2021 9:23pm
You had me at "She looks down upon him" ... love it when a lady takes control ... fun erotic write ... great last line ...
30th Apr 2021 10:11am
Glad you liked it. I think that's why most of my writing is primarily for women - even in a "submissive" situation, they are in control, if that makes sense?
Thanks for your feedback.
Thanks for your feedback.
29th Apr 2021 10:19pm
The eroticism of a woman taking control, and the last line slaps you back to reality of you underestimating the power..
30th Apr 2021 10:12am
Women should always have the power! Including the power to choose to be submissive!
Thanks for your feedback.
Thanks for your feedback.
30th Apr 2021 4:22pm
She looks down upon him, bound to the bed.
This is what happens to a handsome Tomcat who looks at my breasts and not listen to what I said
Checks that the gag is tight round his head
I suppose my satin jeweled thong weakened you… mm... and that color red
Then stands astride him and strips-off her dress
You wanna feel all up in this silken butter rum melt
Admires his cock as it grows to its best
Oh... yes... mm... a quick kiss to the firm helmet tip before my silken and moist cove make you melt after its caressed and financially kept
She lowers herself, rubs clit upon tip
Oh papi... sss... the width of your dick is stretching my creamy abyss
Then plunges upon him with a crack of her whip
Leaning down then kissing your concealed lips, my pussy walls seesawing up and down... mm... I know you loving all up in this
She rides him and grinds him. Takes what she needs
Leaning my hand backwards, giving your balls a gentle squeeze, the elongation of your girth still in the hunt to please
She screams as she comes, but then she proceeds
Palms to your chest wall , my lover’s nest hammering up and down, and then gyrating, giving you all the honeyed sweetness of me
To lift herself off, denying his high
I love to hear your grunts and begging, without explaining any whys… your pre-cum has toppled the tip, I must admit its eye candy to my mouth, no lie
His frustration clear from his gag-muffled cry
Mm... more money and then I would had let you thrust deeper with each dip, slip, and slide
She sucks his erection, deep and at pace
Choking, gagging, drooling making sure no pearly drips of desire go to waste
But again she denies him, with a smile on her face
Or, no continuous oral jubilation in this case
He'd been bragging to pals of her desires and lust
A sexy high-class escort, perky breasts, six-inch stilettoes, and a red thong…. you should never trust
So taking revenge seems totally just
Known in these underground parts as a sweet kitty at best, a seductress from the East to the West, naughty under covers after we’ve met
So, with a ring of gloss red around the base of his cock
I hate to leave you stud, however, time is of essence to me from looking over at the clock, another wealthy client waits, whose income I refuse to block
And her juices still glistening on his shaft hard as rock
I will be nice and leave the door unlocked
She leaves him bound up and gets on with her life
Along with my calling card on the nightstand, in case arising strife
Leaves him bound up to be found by his wife
Oh, as they say... that’s life
This is a poem I do adore... smile my handsome one, you have been softy blended, mm… I did love when you were all up in it. With your permission I would love to add this to my Blendology Forum.
This is what happens to a handsome Tomcat who looks at my breasts and not listen to what I said
Checks that the gag is tight round his head
I suppose my satin jeweled thong weakened you… mm... and that color red
Then stands astride him and strips-off her dress
You wanna feel all up in this silken butter rum melt
Admires his cock as it grows to its best
Oh... yes... mm... a quick kiss to the firm helmet tip before my silken and moist cove make you melt after its caressed and financially kept
She lowers herself, rubs clit upon tip
Oh papi... sss... the width of your dick is stretching my creamy abyss
Then plunges upon him with a crack of her whip
Leaning down then kissing your concealed lips, my pussy walls seesawing up and down... mm... I know you loving all up in this
She rides him and grinds him. Takes what she needs
Leaning my hand backwards, giving your balls a gentle squeeze, the elongation of your girth still in the hunt to please
She screams as she comes, but then she proceeds
Palms to your chest wall , my lover’s nest hammering up and down, and then gyrating, giving you all the honeyed sweetness of me
To lift herself off, denying his high
I love to hear your grunts and begging, without explaining any whys… your pre-cum has toppled the tip, I must admit its eye candy to my mouth, no lie
His frustration clear from his gag-muffled cry
Mm... more money and then I would had let you thrust deeper with each dip, slip, and slide
She sucks his erection, deep and at pace
Choking, gagging, drooling making sure no pearly drips of desire go to waste
But again she denies him, with a smile on her face
Or, no continuous oral jubilation in this case
He'd been bragging to pals of her desires and lust
A sexy high-class escort, perky breasts, six-inch stilettoes, and a red thong…. you should never trust
So taking revenge seems totally just
Known in these underground parts as a sweet kitty at best, a seductress from the East to the West, naughty under covers after we’ve met
So, with a ring of gloss red around the base of his cock
I hate to leave you stud, however, time is of essence to me from looking over at the clock, another wealthy client waits, whose income I refuse to block
And her juices still glistening on his shaft hard as rock
I will be nice and leave the door unlocked
She leaves him bound up and gets on with her life
Along with my calling card on the nightstand, in case arising strife
Leaves him bound up to be found by his wife
Oh, as they say... that’s life
This is a poem I do adore... smile my handsome one, you have been softy blended, mm… I did love when you were all up in it. With your permission I would love to add this to my Blendology Forum.
30th Apr 2021 4:55pm
Well, thank you Sweet Kitty Cat. Thank you for taking the time to add your interpretation, I hadn't seen it as an escort, but a mistress who's lover was too excited and proud of what she let him do that he couldn't help but boast... only to get his comeuppance. But I like the financial twist!
I would be honoured for you to include it in your Blendology Forum.
I would be honoured for you to include it in your Blendology Forum.
3rd May 2021 5:17pm
I really enjoyed this poem and where it went. To me the flow was not consistent. I probably should not, but I took the liberty to edit it some so it flowed better for me. On the way, my editing took a slightly different direction. Hope you don't mind. I hope I have not offended you. Good or bad, please let me know what you think.
Sweet Revenge! (edited by Eightmore)
She looks down upon him, where she's him bound to the bed.
Checks the mouth gag, still is tight, and fastened round his head.
She stands up beside him and she strips-off her fine dress.
Sees that his cock is growing, doesn't want her dress a mess.
She lowers herself on him, rubs her clit with just his tip.
Then plunges down upon him, he hears the cracking of her whip.
She rides him and she grinds him, fucks his cock for what she needs.
She screams as she is cumming, gets all wet and then proceeds
To lift herself off of his hardness, denying his orgasm high.
His frustration clear and evident from his gagged and muffled cry.
She sucks on his erection, deep-throating it in place.
She denies him once again, with a smile upon her face.
He had been bragging to his pals of her desires and of her lust
To take revenge by denying him, seemed so right and oh so just
So, with a ring of lipstick red around the ball base of his cock,
And her orgasm juices glistening on his shaft as hard as rock,
She leaves him fastened to the bed, leaves a signed note for his wife
Shoves a dildo up his ass, and she gets on with her life.
Sweet Revenge! (edited by Eightmore)
She looks down upon him, where she's him bound to the bed.
Checks the mouth gag, still is tight, and fastened round his head.
She stands up beside him and she strips-off her fine dress.
Sees that his cock is growing, doesn't want her dress a mess.
She lowers herself on him, rubs her clit with just his tip.
Then plunges down upon him, he hears the cracking of her whip.
She rides him and she grinds him, fucks his cock for what she needs.
She screams as she is cumming, gets all wet and then proceeds
To lift herself off of his hardness, denying his orgasm high.
His frustration clear and evident from his gagged and muffled cry.
She sucks on his erection, deep-throating it in place.
She denies him once again, with a smile upon her face.
He had been bragging to his pals of her desires and of her lust
To take revenge by denying him, seemed so right and oh so just
So, with a ring of lipstick red around the ball base of his cock,
And her orgasm juices glistening on his shaft as hard as rock,
She leaves him fastened to the bed, leaves a signed note for his wife
Shoves a dildo up his ass, and she gets on with her life.
