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Alone
The roses are black,
my tears run blue,
remembering the times,
I once had with you.
You left this world,
a bitter place,
you took the sunshine,
that warmed my face.
Now the nights are cold,
time is getting slower,
there is no happiness now,
my feelings are getting lower.
my tears run blue,
remembering the times,
I once had with you.
You left this world,
a bitter place,
you took the sunshine,
that warmed my face.
Now the nights are cold,
time is getting slower,
there is no happiness now,
my feelings are getting lower.
Published 17th Feb 2012
| Edited 15th Apr 2012
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17th Feb 2012 00:07am
i like your rhythm in this poem, and i feel what you're saying... great poem
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25th Feb 2012 3:11am
Two minutes to write, 30 seconds to read.. still well worth the time.
25th Feb 2012 3:13pm
7th Apr 2012 00:39am
Now the nights are cold,
time is getting slower,
there is no happiness now,
my feelings getting lower.
*&^*&^*&^*&^
GOOD POWERFUL POEM
Take a closer look ar the last line of your poem
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MY FEELINGS ^ GETTING LOWER
## ########(( ARE GETTING LOWER))
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time is getting slower,
there is no happiness now,
my feelings getting lower.
*&^*&^*&^*&^
GOOD POWERFUL POEM
Take a closer look ar the last line of your poem
!£!£!£!£
^v^v^v^v
MY FEELINGS ^ GETTING LOWER
## ########(( ARE GETTING LOWER))
The Warrior Poet
B8B8B8B8B8B8B8B8B8B8
25th Jun 2012 9:37pm
