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Detached

Can you understand?
The weightlessness of the soft sand
That pours through your veins
And enters your brain, only to find it
Detached.
Written by Keushwalker
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I sustained a bad concussion and lost the ability to write for a few days. Once I was able to write again this was the first thing I wrote
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