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In Spirit
when the feeling in your mind
beats the feeling in real life
I've had this feeling fantasizing
on more than one occasion
I think I'd be better off in spirit
cos my life is already going to waste
I haven't lived it
beats the feeling in real life
I've had this feeling fantasizing
on more than one occasion
I think I'd be better off in spirit
cos my life is already going to waste
I haven't lived it
Published 16th Feb 2021
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16th Feb 2021 4:12pm
Dear S,
This is so poignant a write. It is, for me, an isolation like no other when I feel left behind and not “living” life as I view others living theirs. “ I think I'd be better off in spirit ” the touchstone of your poem that I have contemplated many times. I appreciate you sharing this piece I think many of us feel this daily. H🌷
This is so poignant a write. It is, for me, an isolation like no other when I feel left behind and not “living” life as I view others living theirs. “ I think I'd be better off in spirit ” the touchstone of your poem that I have contemplated many times. I appreciate you sharing this piece I think many of us feel this daily. H🌷
20th Feb 2021 7:22pm
Dear Honoria.I really appreciate your feedback.I got emotional reading through it.it truly touched on what this write means to me honestly.the thought of others relating did not initially cross my mind.I'm enlightened.Thank you
