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the things you're stuck with
the old curiosity shop had to close due to a lack of interestingly enough I have a packet of dried starfish I can now never take back
Published 6th Feb 2021
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6th Feb 2021 11:52pm
7th Feb 2021 1:33am
Starfish. Fascinating little creatures. I've had the privilege of getting to know some of them personally since coming to the beach.
7th Feb 2021 10:02am
this is with simple &lucid literal .... & yet the subtly felt layers- emotional metaphorical spiritual existential philosophical meanings & loadedness to me..
& yes, the unique conjoining seamlessness & wordplay realativities you display in such minimalism... is sheer brilliance & engaging & touching.. btw the 'dried starfish' reminds of my mom's kitchen's yesterday recipe of dried pompret.. & yet the 'stuck up' as the 'now never take back' part.. strikes symbolically destiny & eternity . juz me . take care & shine on :)
& yes, the unique conjoining seamlessness & wordplay realativities you display in such minimalism... is sheer brilliance & engaging & touching.. btw the 'dried starfish' reminds of my mom's kitchen's yesterday recipe of dried pompret.. & yet the 'stuck up' as the 'now never take back' part.. strikes symbolically destiny & eternity . juz me . take care & shine on :)
7th Feb 2021 11:51am
