the second line strikes me with such eternity of love's beauty ...& from this the first line becomes even more beautiful in eternity from the maturing wise deathlessness in love. .juz me:)
had felt grasped in all these yearless years of du my poetic abode with you such ageless poets' poetics .. to the awakening .that..the words & so literal meanings too often carry the infinte essence in their feltness.. shine on adored poet :)