The end is dry

Oww ... That hurt ... Imaging how 2020 feels lol ... Well done ... Bless and love ... ..

Bleak years deserve bleak verses

Harsh reality
Powerful write
Love and light
Ron

yes - smiles

Nicely composed dear poetess..respect and Happy New Year 😇😁

thank you sir

Respect dear poetess wink with a smile enjoy your day today and Happy New Years 😇

You need to lube up.  Hope you enjoy 2021 happy.  Keep on writing.

perhaps - you too year wise

Rich in darkly spun clouds of Stygian hue. None do it better whether upon the altar of love's delight, or the darkness of love's blight and plight.

XoXoXo
John

Reading this again I think it needs some work on the metre and a rework onvthe first verse that is too wordy. But thank you for your thoughts.