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Sweet Girl
Her slender form excites me so
She glares at me with the eyes of a doe
The sweat of her brow and her back
And mascara that runs well with tears
Her pussy swollen over
Bruised flowers are the best
" You hurt me, I'm sore all over. I like it when it hurts."
She says as she soothes herself with another drink
I believe that we're better when we're broken
The gift of past traumas always gets me hard
She is the same, always wet to the touch and good for a fuck
The best head I ever got was that bitch's warm, French throat
Our tristes always ended in a busted nut and empty bags of blow
Oh what times we had
I wished her the best and she wished me dead
All the best sweet girl, and I hope your man gets you off like I used too
Xoxo
She glares at me with the eyes of a doe
The sweat of her brow and her back
And mascara that runs well with tears
Her pussy swollen over
Bruised flowers are the best
" You hurt me, I'm sore all over. I like it when it hurts."
She says as she soothes herself with another drink
I believe that we're better when we're broken
The gift of past traumas always gets me hard
She is the same, always wet to the touch and good for a fuck
The best head I ever got was that bitch's warm, French throat
Our tristes always ended in a busted nut and empty bags of blow
Oh what times we had
I wished her the best and she wished me dead
All the best sweet girl, and I hope your man gets you off like I used too
Xoxo
Published 30th Dec 2020
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17th Feb 2021 2:25pm
I’m not too sure about “better when we’re broken...” as that adds an additional burden to unpack whilst trying to navigate your way through someone else’s underlying issues, in addition to trying to also process yours and find some kind of healing and normality.
A history of past trauma has oft left women open to being exploited from men who aren’t best placed or capable of deploying any emotional intelligence as they don’t quite know how to, unless they’ve matured and grown from their end.
Usually, that comes with age, and life experience, and oft both parties will violate one another.
Sometimes, past trauma determines how a woman identifies with and defines her own sexuality. If the past trauma was connected to an abuser who was ‘soft & gentle’ in any form whilst inflicting any kind of abuse, then ‘soft & gentle’ with a lover will be a trigger.
Hence, on many occasions you’ll find women with past trauma, who’re slightly twisted.
Masochism, is then misinterpreted and if the trust isn’t present, can oft be exploited by men who know not how to care for their woman after going hard at it to enable her to derive some kind of pleasure.
Self medicating with drugs oft make the situation dysfunctional & untenable, in the end.
You pose an interesting scenario, and I like the honesty in your write; it’s certainly a common thread amongst many of us who’ve been there, and done that !
Peace be unto you...🙏
A history of past trauma has oft left women open to being exploited from men who aren’t best placed or capable of deploying any emotional intelligence as they don’t quite know how to, unless they’ve matured and grown from their end.
Usually, that comes with age, and life experience, and oft both parties will violate one another.
Sometimes, past trauma determines how a woman identifies with and defines her own sexuality. If the past trauma was connected to an abuser who was ‘soft & gentle’ in any form whilst inflicting any kind of abuse, then ‘soft & gentle’ with a lover will be a trigger.
Hence, on many occasions you’ll find women with past trauma, who’re slightly twisted.
Masochism, is then misinterpreted and if the trust isn’t present, can oft be exploited by men who know not how to care for their woman after going hard at it to enable her to derive some kind of pleasure.
Self medicating with drugs oft make the situation dysfunctional & untenable, in the end.
You pose an interesting scenario, and I like the honesty in your write; it’s certainly a common thread amongst many of us who’ve been there, and done that !
Peace be unto you...🙏
17th Feb 2021 4:41pm
Just two lost souls in a cycle of abuse and trauma lost in the fog of addictions...thanks for reading and your thoughts
