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MiniSixerShots: day-night/word-silence or so extremeties.. are a 'seamless homogeneity' for us, The Absolute Travellers
https://youtu.be/JJDv_bAOaz0
1.
::circa~ noctem:
our night eye
feels ~ sleeps
h o m e
2.
::abyss::
in (worded) betweenness.. is true
struggle
3.
::pollen::
your throwing
eyes.. my death~
throes
4.
::brute~ blow(n)::
ashes you lay...
burnt down
l i e s
5.
::'unbenumbst'::
at one press~ touch..
em o t i o n s
e x p l o d e
6.
::urban 'bęte noire'::
'sensex' abuzz
biz- specie: 'love'-
desensitized
*song link: stirring song sung by the (Universal Hero' as we call him here).. actor himself, #Kamalhaasan.. 2003 classik tamil flick 'Anbe Sivam"... #LoveIsTheOnlyReligion #CallForHumanity
Published 15th Dec 2020
| Edited 19th Dec 2020
Author's Note
#119 ERULGCT. Rob xc/ Also #NoPoo/ 151220/ 22:12:47
*(Excluding Title, 6 poems of 6 word each, 2-3 lines poem & but last line with a single word, as in our Word Play Group. had posted some above in there earlier.THanks, Light & Love All)
**Pic: Web. 1913, Wassiliy Kandinsky Abstract Art, "Black Lines"
*(Excluding Title, 6 poems of 6 word each, 2-3 lines poem & but last line with a single word, as in our Word Play Group. had posted some above in there earlier.THanks, Light & Love All)
**Pic: Web. 1913, Wassiliy Kandinsky Abstract Art, "Black Lines"
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15th Dec 2020 5:23pm
I find your style of poetry very strange and not all that accessible, but you do generate strong images and the sense of an emotional journey, which good poetry should. I'm especially fond of parts 3 and 4, which feel violent and manic.
Gratitudes much for your time & frank straight constructive comment Jack.. Its an honour to listen & grasp in your wise poetic words.. for betterment.. as far as style, i think style is something that is natural to one & whatever other is deliberately made up is not poetry or style perhaps.. yes agrees many finds it hard.. to follow what i flow.. but something inner says.. poetry is truth ..it is beyond language.. & whatever poetic moment needs o be captured & expressed ..is destiny & divine act that aligns.. so qunitessentially one needs to flow the flow this now.. but yes i totally hear you, as i/one read more & more... write more & more.. sculpting refining happens in an accessibility hopefully.. the simplification too would reap in that timely fruition i hope... excuse my lengthy blabberations.. but truly enjoy your presence & honest value adds you do in the reads & comment.. & of course your poetry itself is a treasure .. reavealing what you say.. thanks again adored Poet :)
15th Dec 2020 9:48pm
Liking these six shooters. Very much. A succinct salvo from the shot gun of your soul. Love me xx
19th Dec 2020 3:25pm
Awwe Thanks muchie Doo.. for short comment but infinite warmth of love & support . Love Ev xx
