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gancha
Soy un hombre
de Fidello
Tengo ganas
hasta el cielo
No voy a interpritad
lo que hay a
Aprender
Sabes que negocios
no vale
con la paz
Siempre hay
que conocer;
Nada
puede asistir
cuando todo sera
Mal
Pero
Si, piensas en
su gente
el Mundo
es tu casa...
de Fidello
Tengo ganas
hasta el cielo
No voy a interpritad
lo que hay a
Aprender
Sabes que negocios
no vale
con la paz
Siempre hay
que conocer;
Nada
puede asistir
cuando todo sera
Mal
Pero
Si, piensas en
su gente
el Mundo
es tu casa...
Published 4th Feb 2012
| Edited 5th Nov 2014
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Anonymous
4th Feb 2012 2:10am
Hi....I can read French...and a bit of Spanish...this looks good...but isn't this a forum for English poetry....I have put poetry into GOOGLE TRANSLATE...and it worked poorly...perhaps some person on DUP could help you with the ENGLISH TRANSLATION
4th Feb 2012 3:41am
this is my interpretation of my poem "Gancha" you must understand that a computer is incapable of translating cultural sentiment... this is a new branch for me so it can be rough. just a start :)
I am a man of meager living
yet my courage can reach the heavens
Still unable to explain;
What there is to learn
You know that all this business
Is no good for the peace
tho it must be something
all of us shall face
Nothing will ever help
when everything is wrong
but if you think about your people
the World can be your home...
Fyi... Every latin language has a 100 different meanings for a single word. ie; "Romance lang"... word's have feeling n history, defined by the perspective and emotional state of the speaker.
I am a man of meager living
yet my courage can reach the heavens
Still unable to explain;
What there is to learn
You know that all this business
Is no good for the peace
tho it must be something
all of us shall face
Nothing will ever help
when everything is wrong
but if you think about your people
the World can be your home...
Fyi... Every latin language has a 100 different meanings for a single word. ie; "Romance lang"... word's have feeling n history, defined by the perspective and emotional state of the speaker.
4th Feb 2012 3:02am
NOT SURE OF THE REGULATIONS? I am trying new branches with my work so... it's a little rough i know but if you think a computer can tell you the sentiment of regional expression you obviously are at risk with any language.. slang and fabled candor can not be translated they must be experienced... u seem offended that i used a foreign lang.?.?. sounds personal...
Anonymous
4th Feb 2012 3:46am
I am not offended
In Europe most people need to know 4 languages to get by....I was exposed to 5
Translation with google translate ONLY was NOT what I had in mind...read my comment AGAIN
Languages are inherently NOT WELL TRANSLATABLE
so I told you to use google translate and then ASK FOR HELP ON DUP.....
yes...poetry is translated
and read in TRANSLATION...that is how I read poem that were written in Greek, Latin, German
North America refuses to accept the two major second languages as NECESSARY....
For CANADA it is FRENCH
For the USA it is SPANISH
IN CANADA it is MANDATORY to have all things in BOTH LANGUAGES
This is not so for the USA
If you are writing a poem for yourself only
....assuming others do not understand Spanish
then why post it here?
THERE ARE POETS in EVERY country...and they share
their poetry
please note...English is the second language in many countries in the world
People from INDIA post in ENGLISH
I am a trained teacher with MANY years of experience....I am SUSPICIOUS when a student
tells me their mark was a personal dislike of the student...That is unethical and unprofessional...
Please take CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM as is....
In Europe most people need to know 4 languages to get by....I was exposed to 5
Translation with google translate ONLY was NOT what I had in mind...read my comment AGAIN
Languages are inherently NOT WELL TRANSLATABLE
so I told you to use google translate and then ASK FOR HELP ON DUP.....
yes...poetry is translated
and read in TRANSLATION...that is how I read poem that were written in Greek, Latin, German
North America refuses to accept the two major second languages as NECESSARY....
For CANADA it is FRENCH
For the USA it is SPANISH
IN CANADA it is MANDATORY to have all things in BOTH LANGUAGES
This is not so for the USA
If you are writing a poem for yourself only
....assuming others do not understand Spanish
then why post it here?
THERE ARE POETS in EVERY country...and they share
their poetry
please note...English is the second language in many countries in the world
People from INDIA post in ENGLISH
I am a trained teacher with MANY years of experience....I am SUSPICIOUS when a student
tells me their mark was a personal dislike of the student...That is unethical and unprofessional...
Please take CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM as is....
4th Feb 2012 4:07am
being "exposed to lang " and living within a culture are 2 different levels of understanding. Spanish is the planet's most common form of communication. so on a world wide forum this poem has it's place. even if a piece was in german. i would have a german native speaker, translate it not a computer. even in that case they might point out regional differences in sentiment. thats the difference between educated knowledgeable. you can't properly critique a subject when your command over the topic is substandard. I am sure there are some choppy bits in the format... such is the process
