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Fuck You
Wow left me for some shit I cant control
You mad cause my ex randomly decides he wants me back
I mean damn I told him no but all of a sudden shit is my fault
I gave you a year of my life I was yo fuckin ride or die bitch
And you pull this shit
Alright nigga remember this
Aint no body gone ever be there for you like I was
I did shit that nobody else would
I held you down in ways that other bitches couldn’t
And you toss me to the side like I was some no good hoe
Like I was just there for when you wanted to get yo dick wet
Or wanted some good head
Now that you heard this nigga leave a voice mail begginn to get back with me
Im a slut im a hoe im a good for nothing bitch
Like are you serious with this shit
You are just a bitch as nigga lookin for an excuse
Im sorry it took this for me to figure this out, that I had to waste a year of my life
Oh and before I go I just wanna say FUCK YOU and youll never find another bitch as good as me
-Loyalty
You mad cause my ex randomly decides he wants me back
I mean damn I told him no but all of a sudden shit is my fault
I gave you a year of my life I was yo fuckin ride or die bitch
And you pull this shit
Alright nigga remember this
Aint no body gone ever be there for you like I was
I did shit that nobody else would
I held you down in ways that other bitches couldn’t
And you toss me to the side like I was some no good hoe
Like I was just there for when you wanted to get yo dick wet
Or wanted some good head
Now that you heard this nigga leave a voice mail begginn to get back with me
Im a slut im a hoe im a good for nothing bitch
Like are you serious with this shit
You are just a bitch as nigga lookin for an excuse
Im sorry it took this for me to figure this out, that I had to waste a year of my life
Oh and before I go I just wanna say FUCK YOU and youll never find another bitch as good as me
-Loyalty
Published 30th Jan 2012
| Edited 26th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
31st Jan 2012 00:11am
This was a good poem....
Being a white liberal...the N word
makes me VERY UNCOMFORATBLE
The other words you use to describe yourself or your protagonist like, bitch, slut, hoe
also make me uncomfortable
We are living in a NEW WORLD....BARACK OBAMA is PRESIDENT, CONDOLEEZA RICE was Secretary of State.....
Maya Angelou is a POET
What would these people think of you using these words to describe yourself.....????
I think you are better than that....
WHY...because you tried to write a poem
which means you are working through
issues.....
Being a white liberal...the N word
makes me VERY UNCOMFORATBLE
The other words you use to describe yourself or your protagonist like, bitch, slut, hoe
also make me uncomfortable
We are living in a NEW WORLD....BARACK OBAMA is PRESIDENT, CONDOLEEZA RICE was Secretary of State.....
Maya Angelou is a POET
What would these people think of you using these words to describe yourself.....????
I think you are better than that....
WHY...because you tried to write a poem
which means you are working through
issues.....
26th Nov 2013 5:09pm
This kills mes....how is it that me calling myself a hoe slut or bitch offends you? Its funny but people use the shit behind my back anyway so why give it power by NOT using it? same goes for Nigga all im doing is taking the power out of the word
13th May 2015 8:03am
im offensive your offensive hes offensive shes offensive were all offensive to some1 someway. freedom of expression is key to humanity as long as your way of expressing yourself doesnt take away some1 elses freedom or physically harm them in some way. which in this case it deffinitly does not. This poet may write whatever she feels for that is what poetry is.
7th Feb 2012 6:18pm
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30th Dec 2013 1:20pm
The anger is raw sounds true n real
n for real the passion was felt! hate
the N word myself, BUT not becuz
I'm afraid of givin' it 'power' just
becuz I'm tired of knowin'
I grew up my whole life bein' called
it as well n many times used it
I realize how truly disgustin it sounds
to call ourselves what others have called
us too... STILL in the HEAT of your passion
I understand why you used it! lol
Good work lady :)
n for real the passion was felt! hate
the N word myself, BUT not becuz
I'm afraid of givin' it 'power' just
becuz I'm tired of knowin'
I grew up my whole life bein' called
it as well n many times used it
I realize how truly disgustin it sounds
to call ourselves what others have called
us too... STILL in the HEAT of your passion
I understand why you used it! lol
Good work lady :)
