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ELIGIBILITY
°*~°*°~*°~ Eligibility ( 13Words poem ) °*~°*~°*~
COFFEE...
Cigarette...
Study...
Writing...
Reading...
Thinking...
Poetry...
Drunken...
SEX-EROTICISM...
&
YOU...
Repeat...
COFFEE...
Cigarette...
[ * YOU is a hidden part of ME ]
Adeel Ahmed
COFFEE...
Cigarette...
Study...
Writing...
Reading...
Thinking...
Poetry...
Drunken...
SEX-EROTICISM...
&
YOU...
Repeat...
COFFEE...
Cigarette...
[ * YOU is a hidden part of ME ]
Adeel Ahmed
Published 12th Sep 2020
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12th Sep 2020 10:09am
Nice ... I love the short crisp lines ... great line breaks ... the cyclic nature of the poem ... welcome to DUP ...
12th Sep 2020 10:18am
12th Sep 2020 11:46am
Dear A,
Welcome to DU.
I enjoyed the balance of your poem. Especially the notion of
“ YOU is a hidden part of ME” a wonderful concept when you think about. Lovely write. H🌷
Welcome to DU.
I enjoyed the balance of your poem. Especially the notion of
“ YOU is a hidden part of ME” a wonderful concept when you think about. Lovely write. H🌷
12th Sep 2020 11:53am
Pleasure is all mine, thanks a lot for this kind appreciation,
Stay blessed
Stay blessed
12th Sep 2020 11:56am
This is an interesting piece of writing. It says a lot in just few words.
Welcome to DUP! :)
Welcome to DUP! :)
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