Liking It

Very, very hot piece, got to love a good controlled fuck
Love it
Ron x

It's a reflection
of what works for me and
something I make clear

Nice submissive write ... bravo Sweet O ...

Yes - limits and safe
words do have their places, though
I prefer limits

now i know that man not in control it just looks that way we know who is in control

nice lines i read
well done

non-consensual
consent needs its boundaries
defined in advance

To love is to like

and vice versa I suppose

everything I love about rhyming pleasure...xxxlnt!

I am trying to  
build in more content to give
each verse extra spice

Really really love this!!  To release it all because you trust, you know, that you will be safe no matter what comes your way.  That he/she will bring heights of pleasure for you both to explore.  I always love poetry of this kind.

Thank you for the write.

It is rare but can
happen; when it does occur
rainbows and stars rule

I liked it.  Shows the trust and respect you have for each other; each happy with their roles. Supplying each's needs.

One comment - the format font was a bit difficult to read.

I did play to find the best font - for some reason it smudged - I'll have another go on another day

The perfect psychology of dom/sub put into poetry. You are so clever with the emotional background of these relationships. I love how you take me on a trip into what turns you on and makes you stay.

XoXoXo
John

Every poem tells its own story