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I Hate You
I Hate You
Come on now, cheer up lost soul
I was once told it isn't my fault
Why do I feel so guilty, though
Is it just my sin, to ruthless to care what delusions it makes
Is it?
Is. It.
Is it me
Could I be the one in control
Am I the one who is messed up.
Or am I just as blinded as you
Am. I.
Will I end up like you
Will I follow your path
Will I run away or walk steady towards a twisted fate
I don't want to be in your shoes
I don't want to be in my shoes
Easier not to forget then to have the damned words saved for another time
Or is it a feeling that I'll regret not showing
Easier said then done
I guess I'll have to say it one day
Do I believe it
Come on now, cheer up lost soul
I was once told it isn't my fault
Why do I feel so guilty, though
Is it just my sin, to ruthless to care what delusions it makes
Is it?
Is. It.
Is it me
Could I be the one in control
Am I the one who is messed up.
Or am I just as blinded as you
Am. I.
Will I end up like you
Will I follow your path
Will I run away or walk steady towards a twisted fate
I don't want to be in your shoes
I don't want to be in my shoes
Easier not to forget then to have the damned words saved for another time
Or is it a feeling that I'll regret not showing
Easier said then done
I guess I'll have to say it one day
Do I believe it
Published 26th Jan 2012
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28th Jan 2012 3:17am
31st Jan 2012 00:46am
30th Jan 2012 6:26pm
Better to love than hatred.
Better the hatred that the indifference.
It is always a feeling, thanks to which we realize that we are still alive.
The verses sound good.
Better the hatred that the indifference.
It is always a feeling, thanks to which we realize that we are still alive.
The verses sound good.
31st Jan 2012 00:46am
Thank you Luca for taking the time to read my poem.
This is not the original version because another poet told me to put more into it.
This is not the original version because another poet told me to put more into it.
